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Thursday, April 8, 2021

Hurumanu 3 essay

Hey guys so in our Hurumanu 3 we have been making persuasive writing. We had an option to choose from and I chose Why cats are better than Dogs.

Here is my writing hope you like it!! :)


Why Cats are better than Dogs

Do you want to lose half of your money? Certainly not,we all love Cats and Dogs but I’m here to tell you why Cats are better than Dogs. Dogs rely on you to provide them  regular grooming. Cats don’t take up much room in your house. Dogs bark really loud and disturb your neighbours.


Dogs rely on you to provide them regular grooming. Dogs need you to groom them and they rely on you to groom them. It takes about 2 to 3 hours to be groomed. For Cats, they keep themselves clean and you don’t need to always groom them for the same amount of time as Dogs. You also have to pay money to go to a personal groomer for your Dog. On the other hand you also have to buy a Dog house. The cost of a cat house is about $80 but the cost of a dog house starts at $300. 


Average Dogs are about 11 to 24 kilograms and they can take up plenty of space in your house,especially when you have a house that barely has room. Dogs are pets that love to walk around your house and you need to be able to provide enough space for them to walk around. While cats don’t take up much room in your house and they hardly ever knock anything over like dogs do. Most of the time Cats are out of the house. They are much more tidier.


Dogs bark really loud and can disturb the neighbours at night. A Dog's bark can be heard from a distance of 1.8km. Dogs can be really loud, if a neighbour is walking past Dogs can scare them away. Dogs bark can scare young kids,you might even get a complaint. Cats meow are really low and silent. They don’t make loud noises like Dogs.


If  you don’t want to get complaints from your neighbours you should get a Cat. If you want your house to be clean and have more space you should get a Cat. You don’t have to take your Cat out for grooming all the time as Dogs. Now I know you will agree with me that Cats are better than Dogs.

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